i love this too. omfg u are like amazing at this

keep up the good work and level up more so ull be like a pixel magician. ya...keep it up.

shempebra!

 Nice. It reminds me the transparent guy from the movie "Spirited away".

Pretty awesome for a first!        

adorable character designs :D

Crap , i didnt see that, hehe thanks, ive fixed the back now C:

There's one thing that bothers me. The light grey/blue rectangle of the building behind the creature on the right seems to have cut the black line of the creature's back.

Otherwise this is pretty good, I can't say anything someone else hasn't said already about improving it.

Thank you for the crit. I do want to improve so crits are welcomed, yeah i got kinda sloppy at the end, ill keep that in mind next time C:

Thank you!

I love the colors you used, and the concept. Wonderful job!

I like the palette and the scene.

It could be a lot better though if you would fix the jaggies, aa it and properly dither the intermediate shades instead of the (imo quite sloppy) cross hatching you did there on the floor and on the sun.

It's a lovely, magical scene but with room for improvement on the technical side.

 Amazing for a first full.

 Not bad! :)