the sword could be shinier

good, you is a good artist

Maybe it's in a dark place

No, I see what you mean.

well as i was trying to show you threw a edit....

I like the shape, but it looks dark for a metal object.

 That does look a lot better.

Cool. But did you like this one?

Here i did a edit of this to make it look more shiny.

i332.photobucket.com/albums/m349/fucbillgates/editofsword-1.png

No comment?

Better? I think it's much better.

Ok, I'll try again.

The outline is good, however I wouldn't suggest doing pillow shading. It's rather unsightly, and very inrealistic, it makes the blade look very round.