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Excellent first submit. They don't seem to be making much progress escaping, they're now marooned on top of some huge rock pillar. Good call on the monotone bg. Interesting you chose to use it as the preview pic with your foreground layer hidden.
Yeah, your selout is inconsistent. Tall dude's hair needs one more color; looks unfinished. You general use of light isn't the best.
Don't really like the lanky guy but the stubby one rocks.
Many thanks for the tips! I'll surely update this piece as soon as possible regarding your valuable input.
Cool character design! The colored outline on the short guy's head looks good. You should apply that everywhere methinks. The tall guy's hair could have highlights. You could use more colors to smooth out the rock. The white lines on the short guys pants could have a extra color to show shadows from coat.
Nice work. It seems to me as the BG is unfinished. I can understand it as it is but seems disconnected from the foreground.