I thought it was obvious enough that A: the large object in the center is the sun, and B: little effert was put forth in making this.

It's a good choice for a scene, but you could definitly improve it.

I dont know why but I really like it. The composition.

Guys are right though, for Pixeljoint its really too much of just a raw idea.

And one specific crit - the asteroids should encyrcle the planet I guess - so the shape of the ring is skewd.

I agree with what that guy said. This piece is pretty uninteresting right now but I think that you could make it better if you wanted to.

 I don't think it will get any votes either - you need a bit more work on this.

1) Shading on the red planet

2) Fix the outline on the smaller moon like planet

3) Bigger asteroids, else it looks boring. My opinion only on this one.

Then it'll probably get some!