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How the F did this get beaten out by a stupid piece of rock???
Haha :) I love wide angles like this.
His face looks a little funny, though.
Also, is it just me or is there is a little swirl or copyright symbol in the far right pretending its dither? ^^
Crisis //
Good work Peach!
You've got some really nice creases on the t - shirt. Would of liked to have seen a few on his trousers (around the crotch area?). The background is very nice:)
I think that lacking a ref picture for that halfpipe is the only regret I have.
Thanks again for comments
I think Jeremy means in the bottom of the halfpipe, the dithering between the darkest and second darkest shade needs some work. The darkest shade seems to gradually fade into the next shade, however the second darkest shade sort of makes an abrupt stop.
Well, my own opinion is that it's a pretty lovely piece anyway, a few little dithering changes won't change much. And I think it conveys a nice flatness in the middle of the ramp the way it is.
I do think that the ramp needs a little more of a vertical slope on the half that is closer to the viewer, it doesn't seem to be as sloped as the other side.
Thats some great prespective you've got going there! looks really good :)
thanks everyone for the comments.
Jeremy are you talking about the lower part of the inside of the halfpipe? the closer part to the viewer?
@ raeli: I am satisfied with the skater, if you take a closer look he couldn't (IMHO) be to distorted 'cause he's in the center of the lens, although I tried to impose a little distortion on him of course.
What Jeremy said about the light to dark.
LoL for some time I had no idea this was for weekly challenge.
that's pretty freakin sweet!
my online critique is that the skateboarder doesn't seem as "fish-eyed" as I would expect, considering how skewed the rest of the ramp looks.
still, awesome work!
Lovely perspective and styledither :D
The one bit that could be better dithered is on the halfpipe- the transition from dark to light is fine, but not the light to dark. (If that's confusing let me know >.<)
I never told this... but i love the perspective! ^^