i like her hair colors, but the color you used to shade the skin seems pretty lame. Apart from that, it looks nice. I personally dont like using black outlines, but thats up to you :P.
Yeah, her neck is a little weird. Other than that, this is awesome.
The shadow in the middle of her throat resembles an adam's apple. So it looks like a male Haruhi in drag...
That's my only real beef. Nice, cute little thing. Very simple.
I don't really get why there is a line going down her neck, but apart apart from that, I like it :)
Looks really great, but the eyes look a bit "alienish". A bit too far apart, maybe? Dunnoe. Looking through the comments I guess it's just me. ^.^"