Yeah, pillow shading is awful and the anatomy is all weird. The weapon is well done.

This is pretty nice but you should really get rid of all the pillow shading, pick a light source and stick with it.

i see youve done alot of work, and this is good so far.

BUT there is a long way to walk. The Shading goes totally wrong in many many places, and the head is 1/3 of the body. But for a beginner its a nice work.