dont like it very much but its a good work tough

who pooped on the female? :P

good job mate

They aint black, perhaps they are too dark but they aint black :)

So editet the outlines so now I hope the outlines aint too dark

When I was about eight I used to draw animals that were called snirds, except mine were snakes with a birds head XD JaJa, well that aside I like it, but possibly get rid of the black outlines on your 'Snirds' :)

Just realised that the outlines were'nt black after all. All the same, maybe try lightening them a bit....