It's your game I'm just saying that the tv monitor with anime head looks icky but the background looks nice so it would be better without the monitor.

Why not do a hologram dude?

well, should i then replace it with the actual guy? and he would like run away after the dialog? give me some suggestions, i rly need the monitor to make the dialog.

 Get rid of the tv monitor and it is very nice.

Very beautiful scene, I like it ^^

thanks :)

I really like this! Nicely DONE!

might be

 Is the guy on the screen heavily based on L from Death Note? Just asking.

alright, i removed the dialogue part. im gonna look on to the second problem soon.

Remove the NPA text. If you need to show NPA elements as part of your work then link to the NPA version in the description.
Also, the outlines of your window are suffering a lot from banding. And everything seems to be very centralised around the bottom right hand corner of the screen which seems to harm the composition of this piece.