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Very sharp in some areas (especially the teeth, maybe it's on purpose ) and a little too bright IMO. Nice texture.
I think the jagged areas are mainly from the mouth due to the dark outlines, try defining the teeth and gums through shading rather than outlines.
Hey, I like this alot. Nice texturing. I like the whitle lines, they work really well as stark lighting. A little more AA wouldn't hurt, but it's not really needed except maybe for white light hitting the back jaw, on the right. And yeah, the teeth are a bit weak, don't dither 'em, smooth 'em. Eyebrow looks unfinished.
Nice monster design.
The white outline is a bit harsh on the eyes. Some smoothing out and also making the light blend across the body would help this piece.
That's one cool fierce looking expression on the monster though:)
Everything looks good except the teeth, seems too jagged and pixely in some spots, makes it hard to read. Perhaps an extra shade to smoothen it out?
Oh, noes! He looks hungry!
But this is good. 5/5, though I feel it's too small. :/
Thank you, man, glad you liked!
There's a lot of time I posted this job and I remembered now that I made some changes on it.