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Lol, I thought you depicted hell as never ending day in school - for eternity you sit in dark class room (in a bench held by the damned) and look thru the window at people playing in the sun :D
Will you make one last revision plase. Change the NPA text on the preview file to something pixelled?
I made some changes to this. I resubmitted my entry, and I am very pleased with the results.
- The Heaven piece is now all clouds, the first one had a cliff's edge and sky. Not enough
clouds. No contrast, it's looks more like a Yin Yang now.
- The stone steps in the Hell piece, now look like worn down stone. Not pieces of plastic.
- The stone doorway into hell got redone. It now looks worn down too.
- In hell, If you look in the black area, you can faintly see stones in the wall. I wanted to do
that so it was not just a black void.
- I also thouched up on things that i missed, a few pixels that needed my attention.
Thanks everyone for the comments. They helped me out a lot.
Ok now, more improvements...
The stairs to Heaven were tweeked, the doorway to Hell was tweeked (added thresh hold), and the scenery behind Hell's door was tweeked.
Hope You like 'em.
Comments are always welcome