my suggestion is taking out that palette, it's an eyesore and ruins the image
The Lileep is alright, but something about the trainer seems out-of-style. I think it's the shirt?
There's no need to submit two. You could have just updated the first one.
stop whining. people are free to tell you what elements ruin the image for them. if you want feedback on the art in general, then post in the WIP forum like everyone else.
p.s. folds in the clothing, lose the sel(ective)-out(lining), the arm doing the pointing is awkward in several ways (bend at the elbow, angle of the wrist).