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The swinging arm stands out the most to me. It seems kind of odd, perhaps because it doesn't move at all (like change the angle of the bend), so it looks really fake :x
Looks much improved. The highlight on his right legs calf for one single frame jars a little for me. I suggest add the highlight for the whole back end of the legs movement when its airborne or remove it on the single frame.
On the whole its got a nice rhythym to it.
Nice animation. The only thing is the highlight on the moving arm should stay where the light is coming from, not moving with the arm.
The pose on the back arm is really weird. Like, it's so stiff. There's no tension in it, and yet it's stiff.
The run is a tad akward with how the legs rise up at the end.