I agree with it needs of contrast but i love it D:
Thank you for your critique! I appreciate your advice. Next time I'll try to make it more contrasty. :)
That's really cute! I like the way you did the bike, and the wood of the fence and door is really nice. I feel like this piece should have more contrast, though. It's hard to see some of the details because it wants to blend together.
This is nice!
Some shadows on the wall maybe? (old lady, shutters)