Well for those perspective problems, the cape is 2d her hand looks somewhat 2d,  from what I saw perspective is one of the main problems in portraits...like I was an expert  , but apart from those small twitches its nice and well done, well another thing that bugs me is her long neck...inac je to celkom dobre.

Thanks for adding it to your favs. :)

Could you please specify the perspective problems?

Thank you! :)

There are some perspective problems...otherwise it looks good, but It could use some more shading...inac nazdar   

Simple and well done. Keep up the good work.

Thanks to both of you! :)

It looks good - can certainly see this face fitting the three prerequisites - well done for a first human body realistically :))

It's much better now :)

Thank you for your advice :)

I removed the white outline.

Thank for your polite critique :) I tried to reduced the palette.

It's neat but i am not fan of the white outline :o

 26 colors?! To me it looks like 11 or 12. I guess it would be better this way. :I