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Oops, There was origionally the strab going aroung her back, I probably coloured over it as I coloured, you can see that in the lineart that it was origionally there; never mind. The hand, who's left, our left or her left? I think you mean our left as it does indeed appear a bit too far across now that you have said it, but again when I drew the lineart it looked okay, but thats probably because you could see her elbow there. I also see what you mean about the legs, one pixel in width's difference makes a huge change... I'll keep an eye out for these sorts of mistakes next time! 
Now to get working on my next piece, a male angel. It's currently sitting on a 300x400 canvas and looking very thick and sketchy thanks to my graphics tablet. Wish me like ever finishing this one. 
The hand on my left needs to come in a bit closer to the arm. When breasts are involved remember that breasts naturally hang an pull outward not inward. Adding some shading will give the breasts shape and depth. And last the leg on my right is slightly more slender than the other. The final critique is actually not anatomy related. If she is wearing a bikini then there should be an additional strap going around her back like a bra. If it's a one piece that ties behind the neck then it's all good. Very good first attempt at the humn form. I hope that I have not discouraged you but have given you info to help further your progress. 
Thanks for the comments, especially about the wings! :)
TropicalSnowcone, I'd like to ask where you think the anatomy is wrong and how you think I could fix the anatomy of the parts you think are wrong. Thanks alot!
i agree with Roll. the anatomy is off but like the wings. Goos Job.
Good luck!