Most of your pieces have a lot of imperfections, but they have a really weird and beautiful atmosphere that just belongs to you.
Here, I'd say you have a perspective issue with the windshield (should be about only half as wide, because of your strong vanishing point).
Llight comes from far away to the right (mirror shadow: good!), so the front can't be lit from the same source and it should show. A secondary, weaker light source from the left, or from above, might do it.
You have probably far too many shades of grey, at least in those too-obvious gradients on the car and bumper. Shiny material have strongly contrasted reflections, not gradients.
And please, get rid of that cheap spoiler thing at the back.
But, don't lose that atmosphere if you do anything!
RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 7/15/2009 10:22
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Most of your pieces have a lot of imperfections, but they have a really weird and beautiful atmosphere that just belongs to you.
Here, I'd say you have a perspective issue with the windshield (should be about only half as wide, because of your strong vanishing point).
Llight comes from far away to the right (mirror shadow: good!), so the front can't be lit from the same source and it should show. A secondary, weaker light source from the left, or from above, might do it.
You have probably far too many shades of grey, at least in those too-obvious gradients on the car and bumper. Shiny material have strongly contrasted reflections, not gradients.
And please, get rid of that cheap spoiler thing at the back.
But, don't lose that atmosphere if you do anything!