Okay sorry you're right. It looked like the guy was going the other direction. Maybe make the hair brown on the guy, or the skin tone darker or something. Because I had to zoom in 2x to see that he was facing toward the viewer.

Well... I really think the stripes are in the right direction, but I fixed most of the suggestions everyone did. Thanks everyone for the comments.

Err..Sorry about that, it lagged out during sending.

Heh..cool little piece but 2 things.

First of all, the stripes in the road are going the wrong direction. That's the direction they would go if he were walking backards.

Also I think it would look a lot cleaner and smoother if the sun animation repeated over and over like frame 1, frame 2. It looks a little jumpy. Like there are some breaks in there where you repeated the same frame twice for it.

Heh..cool little piece but 2 things.

First of all, the stripes in the road are going the wrong direction. That's the direction they would go if he were walking backards.

Also I think it would look a lot cleaner and smoother if the sun animation repeated over and over like frame 1, frame 2. It looks a little jumpy. Like there are some breaks in there where you repeated the same frame twice for it.

Thank you actually the walking looks a lot better Ill try to make something like that

...here... i made quick edit,

http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/desert_walk.gif 

added one more frame for the walk. and tried to smooth out some motions, hope it van help u :)

Thanks for the critic, Ill see what can I do

the walking rly is quite strange, i think u should make the arms move back and forth, and her upper body should bounce up and down aswell, also i think the shadow of her arm is a bit too long 

Yeah, the walking animation is pretty bad. But the road looks nice.

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