This is the thing nightmares are made of :P So very trippy - psychadelic, maybe?:P
Anyways, although distorted (be it intentional or not), you've got the proportions of the face about right, but I think the shoulders are a little too broad, and come too high on the neck. As with the fire, it takes months and months to get it's effect right - it's a significant point in art school. Keep trying though.
I agree with pyro, the dithering style is very cool. I think it makes it look kind of like a painting. Maybe you should make a secondary source of light coming from the fire?
That's pretty scary looking! In my opinion, the fire looks really messed up, you should have tried going with just hair instead. You also need so smoothen your exterior outines (they're very jagged). Other than that, you have some decent dithering going on here. Keep on improving!
Remind me not to meet you! you too scary