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this is really cool. The ice teal color looks great against her skintone. I like the way you shaded the collarbone/chest area- it has detail that some of the other parts of this lack. I agree with what was said about the anatomy and I think that her torso is a bit long while her legs are short. The left (ours) foot looks small to me, despite the perspective. The line on the stomch dividing it in half shouldnt be so prominent either
I agree with AB lazeer but the flip isn't the only solution. Instead think about action lines (check out john k blog). I haven't done much with action lines so take this edit with a grain of salt: http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/walk3-1.gif Maybe you should change how hand grips staff. My edit I raised her right shoulder but I think that was a mistake.
It's a cool picture, but right - body bends unnaturaly. In Soul Calibur example such bending augments following action - crack of a whip - and this bending grows more and more from bottom to top. In your pic (as action is not intended) it would be better to invert everything under the breast and pose will look perfect.
i think her breast look mislocated and not aligned with the abdomen, with gives somewhat of a misproportioned feeling to it (even if alien :P) it looks kinda jaggy overall but otherwise good job. I cant see the ref, dunno if its just me :S
She's hot! I like this art!