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This illustration-style is fantastic, and the unusual, vertigo-inspiring perspective is great!!! 
This is a wonderful style here--especially with the dunes in the background. This is great!
WOW! Pretty good art! I love the composition and the... feeling?! Max points!
She might have more fun if she's sat about a foot to the right instead. Hehehehh... I kid, I kid.
I like the angle of the piece; it's dizzying!
Easily the best of the four, from both an artistic stand point, and a technical one.
this is rly nice! i rly like the vintage palette, also composition is very well and the sky looks great like in all that pieces....
but i think u could rly use some selctive outlining and a little aa on the moon to smooth it out, also i think adding a little animation would be nice too...
here, i made a quick edit for you, to show u what i mean:
http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/01.gif
Beatiful. Yep, the moon shape is odd, but it doesnt matter! Great picture, FAV +
Moon shape is odd... But i really, really like this piece. FAV+
Beautiful perspective, beautiful colors and beautiful concept. <3
dont be so down on yourself, I really like the peice, the perspective is pretty interesting, and the setting of all the peices is cool. I think theyve been getting better and better too. All my critisisms were pretty much already adressed by manupix, I dont have a problem with the black borders though.
Whadyamean, 'last'? Come on, you got talent, don't stop now!
It just takes a *little* more work... ;-)))
Your ideas, compositions and colors are great, so that's done.
You should work on outlines: remove, selout, AA, all? Up to you...
Black borders, well :( ...
Titles: be careful about your English; the use of 'the' is quite more subtle, I'm not so sure about it myself; 'Desert Man' seems better than 'The man of...'. Check with natives! (these for all your pieces)
In this piece:
Some shading in the dunes?
The Moon, it's supposed to be round :0
The foreground spheres, by contrast may not really need to be perfect spheres, and would use better lighting/texture, to give an idea of what material they're made of.
Au boulot! ;-)
this reminds me the Moebius Comics.