Its very nice, the only problem I see is the mouth

Tnx all for the help and nice comentars! 

This is very good! 

Looks very much better now! I think it should be let in in the gallery now. 

ur welcome ^^ ! much better now  

 Tnx onek, for the help! 

hey! ^^ there are some issuses still, mostly with anatomy i guess.... in frontal view the ears should be on one level with the eyes, put them down a bit, also i think the nose is a bit to long and mouth could be about 3 or 4 pixels higher,  the eyes should be more apart... the dithering is ok for me, i like this overdithered look, but shading is rly too soft in some parts ( cheeks, eyeholes), also i dont think u rly need that outline around the mouth, and i rly wold suggest adding neck and shoulders to round this piece out a little 

heres an edit:

http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/face_tormi1000.gif

Ok i made the contrast better  and put darker colors

Yeah, it needs contrast. 

I made an edit too, with and without dithering:

 Hey tnx a lot for all the help Manupix you realy helpt make the picture better! 

OK, that's better, but you can do a lot more.

I did a quick ugly edit in photoshop. It's bad, don't take it like that, it's just to show some points!

1: contrast a lot! Your colors are much too close (and maybe too many), and also much too blended because of your massive dithering.

2: keep the darkest red just for a 1 px outline. You might also use it for the eyes and eyebrows: black is not good, brown may not be necessary.

3: white, idem.

4: dithering: take it away, all or most! It should really only be used very carefully, only when merging colors is necessary.

5: your ears look good now; the eyes should be lower, in the middle of the face. Is the mouth open or closed? If open, show some teeth! The lips I drew are ugly, but you need some. I'm bad at anatomy, sorry. In fact, this eye-and-mouth-wink is difficult to draw, maybe you should stick to a plain face for now.

Have you tried to get help on the forums? Here at PJ, and at Pixellation.

All works are welcome for help, as long as you are willing to improve. And you are! :-)

Manupix i have done some more work on the picture 

Okey i try to do my best then  

Good start, nice colors!

Now, don't make it symmetric, have some light from the side, check those ears.

Also: far too much dithering! and a lot of banding on the outline.

Keep going!