The lineart is  awesome, the shadow/light aplication would be better, but it comes with time and training, when you up your skills you'll have a lot of nice PA's to remake. XD

Can I try to remake  it? If I make something cool I show you to ilustrate my tips. ._.

Excellent, but the shading makes some of the smaller features blend in with the ones behind them.

This is brilliant. Although it does remind me of that one pokemon on the cover of the Ruby version, like minipuck said.

This is a very well done job!!!! can't wait to see your game!

no offence but when i looked at the preview i thought it was a pokemon.

looks nice tho.

This looks pretty cool, the only thing I'm having a problem with is the spikes under his neck. I can't quite tell where they are coming from. Are they jutting out of his chest or from his shoulder? I think they make the design a little confusing.