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you need to work on your outlining, on darker backgrounds it seems very band-y. this can usually be fixed by varying the darkness of the outline in different, shadowed places.
nice though.
JulioAT: Gracias por los comentarios. Voy a seguir practicando y eso, para hacer mejores sprites.
De todos tus sprites los q mas me convencen son este y
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/42786.htm
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/42793.htm
Segui para adelante vas por buen camino con practica vas a allegar lejos.
Hatch: The other pieces are a little old, so it's possible to find more pillow shading in them, since I'm still tackling down how to do the shading the proper way... and this has to do with the lightning direction, since I don't know to a perfection all the spots the light is supposed to hit on some poses. I plan to update this piece later on, not sure when but when I do I'll fix those small issues... also the ones people pointed out back in the WIP thread in here.
arrrgh, Rollerkingdom: Thanks for the comments / favorites.
I think the pillow shading on her wings match pretty well :)
This may have been brought up already elsewhere, but I think you should be aware of your tendency to pillowshade. You have done so to varying degrees on most of your gallery pieces. Here it's most prominent on the left shoulder and the frontmost clump of hair.
Thanks man, glad you like it... I personally like how the wings came out too, considering it could have been a lot worse... 
@ Dex = can you provide an edit of this sprite pointing where are those issues? I'll appreciate if you can edit it so I can keep it for the record when I update this next time. If you have time, if you don't I understand.