You're Finished! (Final Boss) :: Pixel Art Detail

Hey, that's pretty cool!  Yeah, I checked out that contruction part a bit the other day.  I'll have to study it up some more when I get a chance.  Thanks.

Playing around with it works sure. But construction is very helpful. Just check out the blog:

http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/

Here is an example. Note that construciton works for less cartoony stuff also.

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/monster3.gif

I'm not sure what you mean by pixelling. If you want to improve those skills work on smaller sprites. Large pieces like this take a long time to finish.

Thanks for the info.  So what I'm taking from this is the perspective is off?  I really can't draw at all.  I really struggle with line art.  I just play with it til I think it looks right.  How about the pixeling itself?

 I don't buy that his leg is the right length. Also note his left arm is too short (probably because of ur trying to fit it in the frame). Check out construction on John K 's stuff blog. Its what the piece needs. The guy looks good because it follows rules on the blog. Recognisable silloutte, feet follow perspective etc. maybe some bad bits too, like the lamp arm seems too long. If you read the blog you get toolkit to pick out and fix these errors. Drawing naked people can help too as u probably found.

You may have gotten more interest if the perspective was typical of a side scroller. Who cares how it's recieved. Draw to get better.

One of the demons legs are bent that;s why they aren't even length.  I hear ya about the tail...I never had the time to fix that. 

At least you think it's an improvment.  I was surprised this one wasn't more well recieved.  Kind of discouraging.  Maybe I should have done a stupid blob thing.

The guy looks alright. The demon's legs aren't even length, his left one foot doesn't match perspective. You should have drawn the tail in a different position, it distracts from the hand. Those claws needed outlined. Still I think it is an improvement from your other stuff.

I ran out of time.   Sure it's not perfect, but VERY WIPish?????  I think that's going a bit too far.   

The titel doesn't seem to fit with this piece. It looks very WIPish. the lines are very rough.and the light source seems to be comming from different spots.

I love the writings and points though!

Hope to see this when it's really finished.