you need  to improve the AA, and I prefer another method to illuminate the hair, the dithering is not very good.  but beatiful work.

不是说画脏……是说颜色……你用的颜色比较灰暗……整体色调使画面显得不清爽……

我也不知道你翻译过来会不会看的懂……

Dirty?

Thanks for ur comment though the character design is not my own creation... it based on a toy I saw on the web... it was for a contest... and, in addition, I don't have the original pic anymore =(

Kissu!~

Thank you very much for your comment! I'll keep your advice in mind!!

Good.

Nice character design.

颜色看上去很脏~

Nice design

 I like the sleeves and your white palette is very nice. The hair is completely flat though. I would reccomend doing hair without dithering