I think you could enlarge it a bit. I'd expect some "laboratory" white background and don't forget to add some shadows and lights. :x :)
Maybe you should study some tutorials. I like these:
Gas13's tutorials , Mark's tutorials and Noobtorials on PJForum .
thx ill keep it working i made the 1st copy 2 or 3 days ago and have made 3 up dates
It has some good points and some bad points. The fire does not cast light, ,may be you should light the place up! get rid of the black lines, and add some shading and anti-alias, but I think the main thing is that you should make it bigger, so that people don't have to zoom in. The set up is the strongest point of this work, the table, the vace, the pot, the torch, and most of all, the man in the middle, casting a shadow on the wall adding the whole "man in lab" point witch gives this piece one awesome point, doubled with the fact that it is not the worst I've seen, I give you a 2/5. If you spend longer on the pixel art, and follow peoples advice, you are bound to be a wonderful artist. Keep at it!
having trouble seeing the pman in the pic? zoom in a LITTLE then it might look better
Be critical on yourself. First thing is to be shure that picture is understandable. Now it's hard to tell even is there a mentioned man on a picture or not. Give visual clues.
i no that its simple its also my 1st original pixel pic. so ill work on it
I think it's too simple. There is no shading and no reason for using the purple background. :x
You should work on it a bit more. :x :)
thx