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I like the face much better! Her foot seems less like 'cubism'. Yeah, move on to other pieces.
Well, I think it's done, even if it still not perfect (of course).
I'm really glad for the tips, and I hope my next pieces will become better and better. 
No problem... keep up the good work, you have a lot of potential. :P
I made a lot of changes, I think it's really better now, and I have to thank you all for this!
ah ok.. i thought u did gone with the blue/green look,because of the nightish setting
I think it's ingenious... I'm not fond of the colors, since I always been against ms paint in all sense of the word, but you made a good piece. I will be nice to see an alternate colored version with different colors.
OKay. But you can still do a sketch without starting again. Just use it as a guide. As an example:
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/elf-1.gif
[I can't get her arms to look right :( ]
I like the carpet as it is. Goodluck.
Thanks for the tips, Sharprm!
I'll work a bit more on this pic, but I think it's a bit late to draw again from scratch....
It's almost done. Anyway, I'll effort her face and legs, and try to redo the carpet to fit the perspective.
é, realmente não é um dos seus melhores trabalhos :(
muitos erros de perspectiva e pose, o sharprm deu uma boa ajeitada.
Tenta ajeitar, esse PA ainda tem solucao! :D
cool. I forgot you listen to crits ... More tweaking could be done. Please check out http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/
This pic needs good construction which means planning stuff out on paper using simple volumes. If you just draw in pixel program changing bit here and there probably not as good as if properly constructed. I tried tweaking but didn't draw again from scratch (so it still sucks). I'm sure you will check out John's lessons and do well constructed drawing yourself (or for future pics). Goodluck!
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/jinn.gif
edit: I just wanted to add those are great clouds and hills. I really like the rendering of the bike. Its a really interesting composition (eg. girl is twisted into V opposite of carpet V) plus drunk girl alone and bored is fun to look at. I like how you rendered the color change on her upper arm with heart tattoo. Sh*tty pallete well done milking it for something.
Yeah, I think you're right, I'll make some changes.
[edit]~ Well, done. I change some things and I think it's a bit better now..
You can see the old by clicking in the Process.
Jinn your stuff is usually awesome but this piece has the worst construction ... makes me think the perspective changes rather than her body being twisted. Also like she is on a magic carpet, see hand not holding bottle. Bike handlebar suggests bike is floating. Is carpet on water?
A drunk dark elf wench, complete with crashed harley. Not expected subject matter. Nice job.
Pqp cara pqp. Ficou muito bom, muito bom. Nunca imaginei que alguem conseguiria fazer algo assim usando só as cores do paint. Parabéns cara, vc é foda. =P
But to be honest, onek, she was not supposed to be human. (even though she looking like one)
I was a bit influenced by James Cameron's Avatar. If you see the WIP, in the firsts steps she had a tail.
But I like your color choice too, anyway.
nice! i like those over saturated palette pieces! but i think u could have used the colors slightly diffrent, for example u have quite good possibilities for skin tones with the paint palette, this green alien like look is a bit to weird for me now.... also the face could need a bit of tweaking, i would use that black line for the mouth
Her foot looks weird and I don't like the automatic gradient on the sky. Face looks like flattened.