Kyle Katarn Slash :: Pixel Art Detail

view it on a dark bkg and you'll see what i mean

might wanna slow down the breathing a little bit, get rid of the white stickman, take some frames out of the light wave thing, and add maybe 1-2 transition frames in the slash

Where he hell is his lightsaber thing even coming from?
It just "appears" in his hands all of a sudden.

Also the jump to the thrust frame is pretty big.

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/32479.htm
Hopefully one of my animations can help you get some inspiration or an idea to ease into the swing before you go right to that last pose.
 

 owww noo i didnt saw them!!! i guess i have to correct it 

thanks for notice it

At the beginning, when he's breathing :D Later it changes in an outline :) And look that bedefore the slash (breathing and backstep) his left foot isn't shaded :D

The white lines where the head is. If you look closely, you'll see it below the arm and next to the left foot. The white lines are distracting.

 what white lines??

what's with the white lines?

 i know but its something that i abandon time ago, maybe someday i finish it

Animation is strange... It could be smoother. But it's nice pixelart.

PS. I prefer Dessan.