I drew it myself zoomed in.  What could possibly be wrong with it?

Ill try it some time than

actually all you need is a select tool, to move some parts, which im pretty sure, mac paintbrush is capable of, but still it would be better to sketch it out correct right from the start.....

in fact,the dithering is done with a custom pen in photoshop, but normaly, in pixel art, ur supposed to do the dithering by hand, which also should be able in paintbrush ;D 

wow

that's pretty cool, but I dont use programs with that kinda stuff.  I just use mac paintbrush...

I'm pretty new at actually making pixel art

serious?...

composition isnt very attractive, colors are way to bright, size is too big.........etc........ 

some simpel artistic tricks can easily improve this

take a look at THIS....