I wonder who trahes/breaks the trousers and why...?!

Hands are all fingers and no palm: weird!

Maybe more contrast yet in the hair?

And, I was afraid things like this wouldn't happen in this challenge: but they do, congrats! (Meaning, some guys just found an excuse to draw gorgeous chicks...)

Edited- Bigger feet, Head-better position and changed proportions, and I edited the light colour cos it was bugging me, and some other stuff

(nice haircut at second one)

the bermudas arent good, try use darker colours and without many dithering.

the face isnt good, try work harder and make softter

make the feet bigger

and, sorry for bad english

I mean that...no offence , but you don't look good as a woman OO"

 what do u mean?

I was afraid things like THIS will happen in this weeks challenge OO"