Thanx pyro! I haven't talked to you in a while lol

Hey Jimmy! It's Pyro! It seems your improving and I'm glad to see your using Pixel Joint to improve your skill. Keep it up!

thanks but no, it's not in game maker, it's in Game-Editor they are pretty much rivals. I really don't care about the fighting, i use GE cause it's what i started with and what i know how to use. I am editing this again, using onek's tips

The concept is cool. I like the grass and bush. Onek did a great edit, there is lots to learn there! Hope to see the game in the future. Are you making it in Gamemaker?

wow......i suck at drawing

hehe ^^,  i was just doing an edit , and now i see u already reworked it, good job!! :D.... helps it a lot.... but while doing the edit i also recognized that u have like 69 colors... thats too much for this, try o stay around 32 when doing a mockup, also im not too sure about ur palette, the colors dont rly match each other,some colors are too saturated imo, like those of the the save thing, and the chest,... also something like a lifebar would be appropriate... 

heres may edit anyway, 26 colors....

http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/mockup.gif

ya i guess it really does need alot of work. I'm pretty much brand new to pixel art, my worst enemy is shading. Thanks for the comment!

this looks very empty, u should add some detail stuff, like bunches of grass, rocks, trees, idk..... the clouds could need shading, and  some gradient in the sky would be nice....  also the bg is strange because think that ar further away appear to get brighter, not darker, and less saturated....