The AA on the outside of the body looks weird on a dark background, but this is alot better than the last one.

I'm glad i could help! Another thing i just noticed which you may want to look at is the hand up near her head. The wrist seems to end weirdly. But yeah, your developing very well and very quickly. Keep up the good work! :]

Heyy13, is that what i am needing^^

Thank for the avaliation, this really will made me evolve more :)

I will say one thing, 1 week and half, is the time that I started to work hard on pixel art, and the little time that I am here made an enormous maturation on my skills.

I will follow what you said^^

Thanks everyone for the coments and the critics :)

See ya

It's nothing to do with the wing sucking. It's just it's completely flat construction is at odds with the rest of the image's shading. It would however look alot better then it currently does if you were to clean up the outline and aa between the red and black. The hair to me looks unnatural, and again is a deviation of style from the shading on the skin. I'm unsure as too the anatomy as you seem to be following the weird anime bodies trend, but the way the underwear is riding up on her hips is weird. The strands are weirdly placed (especially on the (our) left hip). The black clothing could do with alittle more contrast but yeah. It's pretty good for a large peice, and it is 200% better than the original. Especially anatomy wise. :D

Good luck developing your skills!

Left leg looks like Escher's picture. Otherwise OK, though I didn't like single wing, it looks incomplete, because common sense says that every flying thing should have two wings.

-.- ok... i understand...

My wing sucks :p...

I will try to make another style ^^

Thanks for the comment

See ya

Much better than old version. Proportions of body seems correct now.

And about - I don't like black wing too, maybe smaller... no, i don't like black wing.

Is better than the last indeed, but is still failing at the hair quality, and as Fav said, the wing style is weird compared to the body... I must improve more ç.ç.

Thanks for the comment, I really apreciate it :)

See ya

I still don't like pure black wing :/

This one is looking MUCH better than it's predecessor. Nice to see other users make use of critique...submitting..