I like your picture and as well how the sun is melting

I like the grass but what I dont like is that sun.It has really weird shape, it should be more round and the reflection is to small.But nice work. 

 My first impression was that he was some sort of vampire or elf that couldn't go into the sunlight. Nice detail all around!

 Thanks

yeah, the jolly roger on the ship's sail isn't very noticeable. I agree that it could use some sort of stronger indication that it's a pirate ship.

I see what you mean about the unbalanced composition. Thanks for mentioning it, I'll be sure to focus more on composition in later pieces.

Nice, but not really understandable without the description.

The ship doesn't look pirate; maybe a think bubble with pirates could help.

Also, the composition is unbalanced because of the 3 main elements aligned on the left side.