You have a point there

Uh... I don't think so

hows that meant to be greed? i think you're misunderstanding egoism from greed.

Arms, hands, eyes. Don't really see them until you look.

Some cracks?

Wow,You're a real helper lol

Thanks once again for all your patience And I'll try to learn something off this time

I know that the song talks about her wanting a boy.  But the lyrics just seem a little selfish in the begining

What do you mean by "Not very readable"?

They're circular, But not a perfect circle

I actually like the wonky earth! But there's banding in the double outline, this should be checked.

The char is cute but not very readable.

And the npa preview text, now that's bad, esp since it would take only a few minutes to clean it up.

"and i'm p sure you just drew something out of nowhere and labeled it for the challenge" - how would you know?

Yes the earth is a sphere but maybe it is drawn wonky deliberately, i don't know. Some girls want it all, they'd like to be 40,000 feet tall but still cute, they'd like the whole world (but the world to look ugly compared to them).

Also I don't think cropping would help. big space for big ego.

Maybe some cracks on the earth would be a good idea.

actually the earth is not a perfect sphere. but of course not the point of this thing.

 do you know that the earth is a sphere, right? spheres are circular.

wow metaru sure likes that song :P

looks good but could be improved. especially leg and neck and eyes.

make sure it only uses 20 colors of vista pallete. maybe u should pixel the text greed also. I did an edit for you to learn off (i won't steal your art this time)

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/greed.png

And this shit is over 36 colors and the text on the preview is NPA what the fuck mods what

she's not greedy because she wants the world for herself, its just a metaphor(as the songs talks that she actually wants to have his boyfriend to be loyal to her). that looks nowhere near being the said character, why is the planet so wonky and weird, and why the dithered background. how on earth this represents greed, why so much useless canvas couldn't be just cropped. the anatomy of the character could surely be fixed and refined. everything looks extremely rushed and i'm p sure you just drew something out of nowhere and labeled it for the challenge.