hehe, valeu pelo comentário versuti^^

Irei seguir o que o mano Setzer falou tbm :)

Obrigado e

See ya

Thanks for the comment and most for the tips^^

I changed I bit the collors, and I think it is better now.

I will try to fill the dark areas as you said :)

Thanks very much

A lineart, na minha opinião, é a melhor que você já fez. Gostei mesmo.

Um tom a mais de sombra, talvez na cor do Setzer ficasse interessante, pra adicionar mais detalhes. Mas isso fica a sua escolha, enfim. Gostei o/

This seems really washed out, I thought some more vibrant contrasting colors could really help this piece out, so I did this color edit: http://sj.arc-nova.org/b/helloween2.png - it seems like you've got a lot of detail in there that gets lost from the shades being so close

Another thing that could possibly help this, is to fill the dark areas in the pumpkin instead with bright yellow to show light.