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the hand has many angles in the animation, thats just one of them. The whole animation looks much nicer :)
the hand coming out of the ground looks bad. look at a ref (eg. micky mouse hands if cartoony)
Ok, thanks for good tips!
Keep the suggestions coming! I need them!
Nice look overall, but I think there's room for a lot of small improves. You'd want your diploma to be perfect!
A few ideas: palette needs more work, color ramps are not well integrated; some textures don't work so well: tree, and mostly lower sky (looks solid); some shapes could be more interesting (tree, columns). And there might be a reason for it, but I'm annoyed by the composition option to have elements in front of each other, happens 4 times.
Alright, i need to do something about the dirt then, thanks!
good gui. main character pose bit bland. dirt higher than grass bit weird.
impressive i love the background trees