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I love the red on the shoes- its very classy looking. The colors other than the hair and drink are all quite good as well. I think the legs curve nicely and overall its fairly free of anatomical issues, especially for its size. Its a strong piece with issues here and there
Well i don't much like the hair color, and the bottom foot doesn't really look like a foot. Her legs don't look healthy at all, and instead of elegent she seems more like, greasy? The drink makes me think of pee or cider, and her hand just magically shifts around the stem of the glass. When she drinks the wine, it looks more like she's gulping it if you look at her neck, and like she's just sipping it if you look at her face, also her neck just looks like a big tube rather than anything organic. Her wrist is kinda large when her arm is down, but is perfect when it's closer to her face. Also there is one green pixel in her hair. I'm being very picky.
Otherwise i think this piece is very nice, and i'm actually jelous haha.
Edit* also it looks like her breasts are different shapes, like one is more round and the other one more umm, pear like?
I like it well done. The hair color i don't like so much but the rest is very nice.
idk what they are saying but I LOVE IT.. the shading is great and the animation as well! favd
Thank you for your observations, A.B. Lazer. I will try to do it better next time :-)
By the way, sorry if my English isn't as correct as it could be, it isn't my first language.
- wrist is of right width when she drinks, but too wide when she holds the glass.
- bones and muscles are way too accentuated on the legs. Looks not healthy and rather scary.
- but on the neck bones and muscles aren't even suggested.
- bulb when she's drinking is too evident like she swallows ping-pong balls, not drink.
- Also there a bulb on the feet is too big - compare:
http://images.google.ru/images?hl=en&safe=off&um=1&sa=1&q=high+heels&aq=f&oq=&start=0
A.B. Lazer, I have no intention of updating it because it's an old picture, but I'd like to read about that little details that you see. It's always good to know other people's opinion :-)
Thank you all!
I wouldn't say elegant. Vulgar would be more appropriate.
The animation seems alright but I don't really see the interest. Anyway, pixeling babes must be pleasant, and pixel babes aren't unsightly. But I would qualify this piece as unwarranted. Your technique seems to be quite good, too bad you're in a graphical cliché here.
Your hairs are not so nice, try to use other shades (here your yellow becomes green in the darker areas).
There seem to be a blank in the shade of her right heel.
The color of your wine is not very yummy ^.^
Her body reminds me the babes we see in some comic books (especially the girls in Darkness, they have the same lack of intelligence in the eyes ).
reminds me my try for the previous challenge,it was just like this....just a zombie,lol
I think that's the biggest animated piece I've ever seen, and it's pretty good looking.
Yay! It's really great!
Do you consider updating it? I have some crits. Nothing hard, just little details.
Anti Alias pls. The hair should shade into browns rather than greens. I'm not really seeing the elegane either :P