who is she texting? =P

no, very good.

My only critic is that the shading looks good on details, but overall it doesn't help defining the shape. It's a bit like the "highlights" spot lights in real life, they are used to provide a sharp highlight on surfaces that hit the light perpendicularly, but if there's no other light source, other surfaces are lost in shadows.

I think the skirt doesnt look much lithe clothing o.o

Also, interesting preview lol