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Editing is ok until the deadline, and also after the vote.
The newspaper idea is not readable. Those lines are too random, the columns too close. Try to have a title, one or two large initials, maybe some pictures.
The blue "newspaper" in Setzer's edit is interesting too, makes for a better balance of colors throughout the image.
Oh my gosh, thanks for reminding me about the palette! Credit for the palette goes to Syosa.
Yeah, I forgot to mention that, it was really late when I finished. I should have put it in WIP, I like your idea of sunset. I tried to make it look like a newspaper, but now I see it could have easily been a sea with sunset overhead. Should I edit it? Or would that violate contest rules? I already sent it in as it is now.
Thanks for the comments guys!
I think something a bit more beach and sunsetty could've worked better for this background, I made a quick sloppy edit to illustrate the point. That being said, nice job.
I love the palette!
Since the balloons are displayed as a sort of silhouette poster, this effect might have been stronger by spacing them more evenly, and maybe having similar vehicles on the ground.
Thank you for the comments guys, I hope to make another piece in this style, seeing as I am still trying to find my own style, I feel like this one suits me well. I will try to edit this one sometime too, thank you for the tips Manupix and Setzer, it's really appreciated.