Maybe sometime but for now I like this piece as is for the most part. Thanks for your time!

I think that it will be great if you could put some shading on the piece.

Thanks, I understand. I don't know why I didn't want to clean up the lines. Ill revise it.

I'm sending this back--not because it's not good, but because you've got a lot of really dirty lines and it doesn't seem like there was a lot of attention paid to pixel-level detail for the most part, making it seem more like oekaki. I encourage you to refine this a bit more and resubmit because the design is nice and I think it could make for a great piece :)