i just LOVE this style!

<- is all i can say... but seriously i like it, but the pillow shading, even tho it is suppose to be a picture, doesn't really cut it.

I agree about the skimpy skirt... kinda ruins the peice for me. I mean honestly, that thing would cover ANYTHING O_O

The fishnet armlet... why is it so shiney? o_o That kinda bothers me.

Other then that I see absolutly nothing wrong, this is a wonderfully crafted peice and I really do quite like it.

I dont agree about the anti anilising. To me, AA is ugly and ruins the piece. So dont worry that you didnt use it :)

Kewl, I agree with all the critiques except for the skimpy skirt one .

Ok lets see how to reply to this.. o.0' A friend actually did the breasts on the base, and I just kinda went with them, so I suppose I should fix that, I will try soon! Thanks for the critique on that. As for lightsourcing.. I had origionally meant for it to look like a light was shining in front of her, almost like I was taking a picture. The skirt is to skimpy because the main purpose of the gift was the orange undies ^_^ And as for the black material being to shiny.. meh. I just liky shinyness, and yeah the pattern's bad, I can't do fishnet >.<' -at all-

Thanks so much for all the CC I'll have to try all of that out.

 Nice work on the hair and clothes texturing, but I have to agree with all the critiques already made. The first thing I noticed was the chest which is probably the biggest problem (or maybe I'm just a shallow guy, eh eh) Then the much too crisp outlines, then the lack of a good lightsource and the shading to go with it. But this is still a mighty fine job.

"Well done on the hair. Don't you think the skirt is a little too skimpy? If her hands werent there..."

Skimpy skirts were a gift handed down by god himself. 

Great piece, as mentioned before, some AA would drive this over the edge.  And the breats could use some handy work (Is it me or did that sound naughty?)

 her chest is so skinny and narrow, it's much thinner than her two arms and it kinda doesn't work considering how "busty" you have made her judging by the curves on the sides of the breasts.

either she's busty and squishing it, in which case you need a cleavage line and a DEEP one, at that, or she's flat chested and her arms are over her chest in which case you can get rid of the big curves depicting her heavy chest.

either way works, really.

Everything's great but something is really missing... and most dollers never use it but they really should... AA. Lack of anti-aliasing really ruins this piece... for me at least. Also, you have an inner black line on her chest area, which I just don't see the signifigance of. Her skirt is dynamically position wrong, but I'm guessing your a girl so I'm probably wrong about that detail. It seems very pillow shaded, and the highlights don't make sense from where they seem to come from. Also, her left arm (her left), the stuff on it, isn't really diverse, its just a pattern which seems to "unreal", and why is black cloth that shiny? Other than some anatomy issues, that is about it.

Otherwise... good job!

Well done on the hair. Don't you think the skirt is a little too skimpy? If her hands werent there...