This is so nice :D love the detail on the moon

http://i200.photobucket.com/albums/aa45/b000t/the_moon_revamp.png

My edit is nowhere near perfect, but you'll get the general idea how you can improve the curve. :3

i think it's good, but the tip could be smoother.

Thanks for the advice! D'you have a link for it?

read john k blog on adding detail.

edit: http://johnkcurriculum.blogspot.com/2009/06/hierarchy-forms-within-forms-details.html

@Zack: Yeah, I was worried I'd lost a bit too much of the character.

@Sharprm: That's something I've been struggling with, expressing texture without ruining the form.. It's tricksy.

@Smk: I know. I've been trying to smoothen it out, it's not getting much better. I'll keep working on it though.

Thanks for the comments :)

the bottom-left part feels a tad jagged :<

looks better than the last one. be careful with how you texture doesn't make things look flat.

edit: you could probably give him bloodshot eyes.

It's improved, yes. However, I think that some of the personality in the moon was lost in the revamping. Good work though, looks cool!