yes i am inspired letters for children's books, for this that the snake has a nice heard
I don't agree, it's a very good initial for text in a children's book. It looks very solid in terms of typography, and the containing square space is well identifiable, as is usual for a S. (It's a bit harder with L for example)
maybe you could incorporate something else into the background of this? the snake looks great but there's nothing happening behind it to suggest its an initial/illuminated letter
Cute style!