Its art transformed from pen to pixel... conversation over.

 yea art, this is a pixel art webpage, if you are just trying to copy a larger image, by trying to make all the sketch lines the same, then it is most definatley not pixel art, ure drawing, not pixeling, 30 mins mapping out area? how can you spend 30 mins mapping out an area... especialy for this size

Sorry, but I'll clarify.
The original is LARGE.
Mapping out areas took 30 minutes (Yes I do that stuff... sue me)
Then the real pixelin took 20 minutes, 10 prolly wasted in thought.
Ok?
As for proportions, its sketchy, how can you clarify the real line? I did mess up on the right one though. :( sorry

BTW a lot of the length was trying to make all the sketch-part lines as close to the paper version as possible.
I guess I just won't post sketches... y'all don't see the light. IT'S STILL ART

 how u took so long i will never know?, she is not proportioned right, her breast are un proportioned and her arms are too fat, if this took u 3 hours then you need to seriously rethink how you work, it would take me 20 mins top to draw that, and so if it took you longer due to editing, then this is not a sketch. sorry this is not pixel art, this art for artpad.

I"m not going to bother typing back and forth between this skethes... Naso, you can go read the other one.

 Well...All images are made out of pixels and that dose not make them pixel art, and W/e if u dont wana make something kool out of this, to bad for u.

Its fine as it is... its not supposed to look like anything BUT A SKETCH... it is not a line art, it does not need more colors or shade... and yes it is pixel art, as it is built out of pixels.

 ummm.......try to line art that pick your base colors and shade it then it will be good, right now just it just..........not even pixel art