The character is great, but the whole feeling is weird.
What is she holding? It looks like a giant charcoal block and she's making lines on the wall. Thats what I see.
If she isnt drawing and that thing is supposed to be a gun...then why is she facing towards the wall? And if it is a gun, then why is she smiling?
The whole thing gives me mixed feelings.
@ DrunkBurger: haha ... thanks for the review,

in fact she was holding a gun .. so when I made this picture I was a little confused, to make the background and theme, would ya like this ... sorry
@ TheRobinHood: Thanks