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Wow! You did all that just for me! That's really helpful. Much thanks.
And lots to learn, too. I've updated the image with some changes (Not approved yet, so I can, I guess?)
Contrast up, varied some line weights, controled color count.
Thanks!
actually a good anatomy study, the curves and shapes are quite ok, but on pixel level, this could definetly need some cleaning, its very jaggy in a lot of places like feet and hands, also u have 39 colors going on here, try to keep control over ur color count....also the shadings contrast is little too low and doesnt define the volumes too well...
other than that, the hands seem to big, the chest area looks a little strange and overall she looks very bulky, maybe thats intended idk... also i think u were trying to put too much detail in ur lineart which makes it jaggy , the toes on her left foot for example, rather try to achieve those details with shading or selective outlining
heres a quick edit
http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/classicfairysm5.gif
ur welcome! ^^ i like doing edits...
contrast is much better... i like the legs ...but its still bit jaggy... keep it up