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This is so funny, and really well done. I love that "mmm...lunch!" XD
thanks Shannon : ) might change preview but I can't decide which part to use haha
ehm... IAW?!
Edit: uh oh ah I get it now lols.
Wow, this looks amazing! I love the colors and the entrance way letters- they look good to me! Nice backlighting as well. I definitely think you should change the preview though, because tbh I didn't think I wanted to see the full view at first, haha. Very glad I did click though. You have one of my votes for sure!
IAW stonewall and Robin about the bubble though
edit: IAW= I agree with :P
@Robin
You'll notice that the font's all "mixed up", the R is capitalised too, in fact, it's part of how I actually write...
small Es in caps and caps Rs in small... sorry that's something I got used to doing when in uni, it made taking notes easier in a way, less confusion when learning more than one language at once. I also add a horizontal line to the legs of small q's, lols. Srs.
There are two things bugging me. first it the P looks capitalized while the S doesn't. And the thought bubble stands out way too much.
But it looks realy really good. good luck in the contest :>
I love that green lighting and the shadows from the people. =)
Really cute, I really love the concept. The only thing bugging me, though, is that I think the thought bubble should either go, or be better incorporated colorwise. As it is right now, because they are both white, the thought bubble really takes away from the gateway. The gateway is the focal point, not the thought bubble, so I think you should make the bubble a different color, closer to the medium tones, so it doesnt stand out so much.
it had to be the first place, I think! great work!!