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This is one of my favourites. Very nice. I like the mountains.
fab. you're really improving. just add more detail to the hair
Thank you, I kno there will be some errors and etc but as i keep practicing hopefully my skill will increase, that example is really nice (but between us the artist is like a professioanl xD) Im quite fan of the grass although you two dislike it heheh I gladly appreciate the comment though
Really great improvement. I admire your patience as I've been following this in the forums. I really like your twisty tree on the bottom one. I also like what you did with the preview. Simple, yet draws your eye to it.
I think the hair in all three images could use some highlights and the character on the bottom one could stand out against the background a bit more. Sort of like how the character pops out at you in this one: www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/49694.htm# even your characters in this one: www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/49574.htm
And as Manupix pointed out, the grass bothers me too. Not so much in the foreground, but the detail is really not needed in the background...kind of makes it look a bit busy. I'm no expert, so take my crits with keeping that in mind.
I admire the dedication, enthusiasm, and good humour you showed during the construction of this piece (not everyone would have been so willing to have done as much, especially with the amount of re-working involved).
I trust we'll get to see more soon?
JD
Thank you Slym, it was quite a time consuming but glad for the help and critics of people i made something nice of it
THank you hehe, Well im happy with the grass, idk how it would of turned out with the other one but im proud of the piece together :) even though i couldnt accomplish my goal to make it my piece with more favorites
Congrats for the work you put in there, it shows! =)
I thought he was actually shooting the steel things (squids!), just realized in the forum that they're shot at him. No idea what you could do about it.
And, I still resent that grass! ;D
I saw this in the forums being made, I was just wiating for you to finish <3 - It has such a unique style all ur own, I really adore that, you can really see it in the land and the sky... OH THE SKY (moan) so pretty - my fav part <3
You showed some serious commitment on this piece man... nice work.
I'm digging the size of these screens! I would never attempt anything of this size :P. You should do something to bring the character out a little more because he blends in a lot at the moment : /
I don't want to anger you, but the second screen still looks a bit unfinished, especially the character sprite, and the lighting
The master who fight against the second Hokage of the wood ;) I like the depth and the atmosphere in the background, great work!