Oh, sorry. I was just sorta randomly archive diving, I wasn't really paying attention to the dates on stuff. :D
I'm sure there are alot more issues in this one, but honestly I don't have the drive to fix them right now, In this piece's case it maybe would be even better to start over. Its an older piece I made without even thinking about perspective.
The coloration seems off, and he looks somewhat more rotund than usual. I think that perhaps there are perspective problems with the spikes on his back, too. But it's a good start.
thx for the comments
You're not the first ones stating that he's too upright an needs to be more hunchbackish, a while ago I did some new line art with a more agressive hunched forward pose, but I deleted it and kept this one cause it's more unique
And regarding the shell I did some barley noticable changes, but it's rounder than before
yeah, he need more rounded shell and a hunchback (sort of)
He kind of has a non-Bowser-like shape, and he looks too upright, but well done anyway
You don't need to apologize for my lazyness